After a semester full of descriptions such as "this is a serious problem" and "this is terrible" about my writing, my English professor sent me this:

"Hey, Ron...

I really like your essay. It's stylistically fluent--you actually
sound like you care about what you're saying (which I don't run into
that much in student essays, which usually sound rather
artificial). You argue well, write clearly, and organize
effectively. This is top-notch--a genuinely fluent piece of work.

Grade: A+

Daily Quiz Average: 83

Examination: 77

The last essay shows what you can do when you're at your best, but
considering your major test grades especially, plus the lapse on the
first essay, I'm afraid a "C" is the most appropriate grade. You
know you can do better, though...right?"


Success!!!!!